10/13 edition

Today, the class critiqued the paper. Even though the form has seen a lot of improvement, the substance still need a lot of work.
I have the bad habit to make my sentences too long and complicated. Instead, I should try to have simple and well structured sentences.
And this is a bad habit I have since childhood. The bad ones are hard to get rid of. I can distinctly hear my mother telling me "You need to have smaller and simpler sentences" after proof-reading one of my work in 6th or 7th grade. I still have the same kind of mistake now, which is unfortunate. Only practice good change that. So my goal for this week is to write more. Write on the blog, write for my classes, write for the newspaper, of course.
This week is going to be busy. I have to work on an essay for English 2, have a presentation and report for my photography class. I also have to get all of the information for my wildlife article before friday. I also will be reporting on an art exposition on Thursday.
So yes, I am kept busy.